Monday, November 30, 2015

Week 14 - Reading Diary A

This week I will be reading Ramayan 3392 AD, Volume 3. I enjoyed reading the first two novels very much so I decided to get the third volume.

Ramayana 3392 AD, Volume 3
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The first half of this graphic novel starts off with explaining the history of Baali the Magnificent and how he ended up becoming Baali the monster. He was a great ruler of Kishkindha and waged war against the Asuras. He even fought against Asura Prime himself. He held his ground but eventually fell Asura Primes otherworldly powers. The story picks up where Rama and Lakshman have joined a nephew of Baali the Monster. He escaped the wrath of Baali and decided to recruit some of the best mercenaries in order to fight his uncle. While traveling through the jungle the group is ambushed by a group of genetically mutated beasts and begin fighting.

One of the things that I really like about this graphic novel so far is the improved detail of illustrations compared to volume 1. Volume 2 also showed, in my opinion, more detailed illustrations. The colors and the detail are great. I look forward to reading the second half of this graphic novel.


Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Week 13 - Storytelling - Rambo and the Raiders

“I think this one will work” Rambo said, putting the last wheel back on the wagon.
“I hope so” replied Laksho.

It looked old as if it had been abandoned for a couple years. The wood structure looked slightly rotted in some places but was still solid. With some minor repairs to the wheels they got it back to working order. Rambo, Sinthia, and Laksho had been traveling for days with only one horse. They were trying to avoid the raiders that roamed this region of the mountains and traveling at foot speed didn’t provide them with any advantage. They were lucky to find an abandoned wagon that was actually still working. The irony in the situation is that the wagon had probably been left behind by some travelers or merchants who had been captured or killed by the same raiders. It didn’t matter though; they hooked up their horse and got on their way.

Busted wagon wheel
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It didn’t take long for them to realize that they had in fact been spotted by a raider scout at the last pass. They were traveling for some half a day before they heard the raiders slowly catching up behind them. Their draft horse moved quite well along this rough terrain but the raiders were all on their own Quarter Horses.

“Looks like trouble,” Laksho said, seeing their followers for the first time. “It’s definitely raiders.”
You could always tell the raiders because they usually wore colored bands around their waist to help them differentiate themselves in the heat of combat. Their bright red bands stood out against the green and grey surroundings. Rambo whipped the reins and the horse picked up the pace. Laksho watched as the first raider slowly approached the wagon at full speed. He attempted to jump onto the wagon but simply misjudged the jump. His leading foot missed the wagon completely which caused him to fall forward and hit his head on the wagon. Laksho chuckled at this but Sinthia was not amused. In his desperate attempt to grab on to something, the raider somehow threw his satchel which landed in the bed of the wagon.

The situation began to escalate, however. More raiders were approaching quickly. The next raider actually made in onto the wagon. Laksho reacted quickly and pushed him off the wagon before he could get his balance. The raider pulled him along with him though and he did everything he could to grab onto the wagon and hang on. Sinthia helped pull him up and back into the wagon. Laksho wiped the sweat off his brow.

“Okay, enough of this,” Rambo said. “Laksho, take the reins.”

Laksho jumped into the front seat next to Rambo and grabbed the reins. Rambo then jumped into the bed of the wagon and found his .44 Magnum lever-action rifle. He aimed it at the next raider who barely had a chance to realize what was happening. Rambo fired the first shot with great effect, knocking the raider off of his horse completely. He repeated this; two more shots and two more dead raiders. There almost seemed like an endless supply of raiders, though, and Rambo only had three more bullets. All the while, Sinthia had found the raiderss bag in the wagon and found a stick of dynamite inside along with a flint.

“Rambo, look here,” she said, holding up the dynamite.
Rambo smiled and nodded. “Perfect!”

Laksho chuckled and whipped the reins. “It’s narrow up ahead. Get that thing ready,” he yelled.
Sinthia struggled to light the fuse but succeeded in lighting it just in time. She handed the lit dynamite to Rambo who threw it out just as the road narrowed along a cliff. This was the perfect moment to use the dynamite. They kept moving at full speed and waited. Rambo began to think that it was a dud but his thought was interrupted by one of the loudest sounds he had ever heard. The dynamite knocked enough rock loose to block the road and even hit one or two raiders. The road was clear and they carried on.

Author: Shamik Dasgupta
Artist: Jeevan Kang
Title: Ramayan 3392 AD Vol. 2: Reloaded / Tome of the Wastelands
Year: 2008

Author’s Note

This is yet another story that I decided to retell in the Western style. This original story comes from the Ramayan 3392 AD: Reloaded. It was an interesting read and I thought that this would be fun to turn into a Western. I left the plot pretty much the same, which is what I usually do. The names obviously are changed to be more Western. The background to this is nothing special. I pretty much wanted to stick to telling these stories in a Western setting for my Storybook Portfolio. The image here, as with many of the images I have used for these Western style stories, was chosen in large part because there weren’t many pictures that would suit the nature of this story while still being labeled for re-use. Still, the images works just fine with the story pretty much all taking place while traveling on a wagon. This story was actually somewhat difficult to get started in terms of creativity. This graphic novel was a very fun and interesting read but I had trouble finding a story that was, in my eyes, suitable to be changed into an action packed Western-style story. Overall, it turned out pretty good and I enjoyed writing this very much.

Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Week 13 - Reading Diary B

This week I am reading the second volume to Ramayan 3382 AD. It is simply titled "Ramayan 3392 AD Reloaded." This reading diary is for the second half of this graphic novel.

Ramayan 3392 AD Vol.2
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The second half of this novel really picks up the pace in terms of telling the story. Rama, Lakshman, Vishwamitra, and Seeta are traveling underground the city of Panchvati. They intended to flee when the time was right but they were captured. Rama and Lakshman are forced into gladiator style combat to please the masses. Seeta flees and meets Vishwamitra. Vishwamitra empowers Seeta to use her powers to wipe out Panchvati but ends up showing that he is actually the Asura Prime. 

One of the things I liked about this story was how Rama and Lakshman use the mob to get trick their captors into fighting them in the arena. The other thing I really liked about this story, as I mentioned in the diary covering the first half of this graphic novel, is how much better the illustrations are compared to Volume 1. 

Monday, November 16, 2015

Week 13 - Reading Diary A

This week I am reading the second volume to Ramayan 3382 AD. It is simply titled "Ramayan 3392 AD Reloaded."

Ramayan 3392 AD Vol.2
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The first half of this graphic novel essentially picks up where the first volume of leaves off. Rama an Lakshman were transported from Mithila to a junkyard where they encounter Seeta. Seeta is needed to help heal Rama from his dangerous fight with Devan-Tak. After being miraculously healed, Rama, Lakshman, and Seeta continue on in an attempt to flee capture. In the process, they end up running into Vishwamitra who helps them find safety.

I think the thing I like the most about this graphic novel are the improved illustrations compared to those in the first volume. These images show more detail and are more colorful.

Sunday, November 15, 2015

Storytelling Portfolio

1. Brothers in Blood - Here is a story of how the two brothers challenge and defeat a mighty demon that has haunted the jungle for ages.

2. Billy Raven's Death - This story follows the final battle between a nefarious kidnapper and two brothers out for justice. The question is... will justice prevail?

3. Ben and His New Rifle - This story follows Ben and his brothers on a camping trip. Ben's trip changes quickly but turns out for better

4. The Lawman Riders - This story follows Kristopher and Baldrik to a bronc riding competition where they encounter corruption. What will become of them when the mayor decides he doesn't want them around?

5. No Man's Land - This story follows Lakshman wandering through the Jara Waste. Lakshman, tired and thirsty, is being followed. Are they trying to help or capture him?

6. Rambo and the Raiders - Rambo, Laksho, and Sinthia are chased down by some raiders. Check out the explosive ending to this wild ride.

Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Week 12 - Reading Diary B

This is covering the last section of Ramayana 3392 AD.



Ramayana: 3392 AD

This last section covers the events that are experienced by Bahrat and Shatrugan as Kalemni is about to assume the new position of Maharaj of Armagarh. At first, it shows how Kalemni slowly gained power in Armagarh through deception and use of the Asuras. Shatrugan eventually escape and plan to stop Kalemni before he can completely gain control as the new Maharaj. They decide to split up in order to both expose the Asuras and stop Kalemni. They accomplish their mission and Bahrat assumes his role as Kind of Armagarh.

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this graphic novel. The retelling of this story in this dystopian setting is very enjoyable and I really liked the colorful and interesting illustrations. I would recommend that anyone read through this graphic novel to gain a new and different perspective of the Ramayana. 

Monday, November 9, 2015

Week 12 - Reading Diary A

This week I will be finishing up the graphic novel Ramayana 3392AD.

Ramayana: 3392 AD
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The third section starts off by completing the story about Rama traveling to and finding Mithila.  Mithila ends up being a strange place where normal physics change. Everything is underwater, so to speak, but it's as if there was no water. Rama and Lakshman defeat some of  Ravan's lead officers so he sends his own offspring to find and capture Seeta. Seeta is a living person, gifted by the earth itself. She has special abilities. While Ravan's offspring are battling Rama and Lakshman, Seeta cries out for the fightint to stop and the local plants end up swallowing and devouring Ravan's offsprings into the environment. This part of the graphic novel ends when Ravan shows up himself to destory everyone.

The second part of this third section is titled "Armagarh: Secrets from the underground." This story starts out as Mandavi and her father skulk through the deeply hidden computer vaults of Rajmahal. They end up finding that the "gods" that they were always taught to believe in were in fact computer programs created by humans from a long time ago. I'm certainly looking forward to finishing this book, it's getting pretty interesting.

Thursday, November 5, 2015

Week 11 - Storytelling

This desert was inhospitable. Nomads and outlaws even avoided this place. The Jara Waste it was called. It really was a waste, a waste of time. That’s all Laksho had however. Time. After the death of his father, all he could do was keep moving. Unfortunately, the death of his father meant that numerous political factions, which had various interests in the West, would have liked to see Laksho dead. Laksho knew this. He also knew he was being followed.


“I ran out of biscuits,” he said talking to himself, stumbling through the desert. “Too bad that’s not my biggest problem right now.”

He stopped a moment to look around. “What I need is water.”

He took the only water bladder he had and opened it just like he’d done for the fourth time that day. It was still empty.
“Now why should I expect this to be any different now?” he asked himself.


Thirsty and frustrated, he threw the leather bladder down. Now that he wasn’t focused so intensely on his own thirst, he took another moment to soak in his surroundings. His ear twitched and he immediately drew his sidearm. His nickel-plated Colt Peacemaker glistened in what bit of sunlight was making it through the thick, dusty wind. Three masked men in black came riding over the hill behind him. Finally, he thought, he could end this little game of chase. He had no intentions of going back to New York to sign over his shares of the Union-Pacific railroad. The three men stopped their horses and dismounted.


“Laksho, we’re the-”

“Stop!” Laksho interrupted. “I know who you are and I know what you want.”

The leader of the group stepped towards Laksho. “The railroad just-”

“Not going to happen,” Laksho interrupted again while checking the cylinder of his revolver.
“Leave me alone or meet your maker!”


The three men looked at each other for a moment. Laksho knew what was about to happen. The railroad police were oftentimes ex-military men who got bored. Many of them took up the railroad badge because the railroad was willing to hire, let's say, men of less desirable quality. These men were willing to cheat, steal, or kidnap anyone who stood in the way of the railroad. They had one purpose here, however. Capture or kill. It was time.


Just then the wind picked up and a huge wall of dust shrouded everyone’s vision. The three railroad police split up. They knew splitting up would increase the chances of at least one of them surviving. Laksho backpedalled in order to keep all three targets in front of him. Backpedalling in sand was difficult, even for strong men. The three killers surrounded him quickly. One gained enough courage to close in on Laksho. Laksho caught him, however, and put two shots in him. He went down hard. Laksho thought it was odd how sand can still make a thud sound sometimes. The other two men took that opportunity to throw ropes around Laksho. One got around his torso, including his upper arms. The other rope wrapped up his gun hand.


The closest railroad man punched him right in the face. Laksho thought he might actually die at this moment. He probably would have simply given up at some point. Good riddance, he thought. Out of nowhere he heard a fast whizzing sound go past his head. The railroad man behind him fell to his knees. Laksho looked back to find an arrow in the man’s chest, right at his heart. The other railroad man immediately stopped and began to scan for this new threat. He took an arrow to the knee and fell down.


“Aw hell!” the man said. “This is what adventure gets me. I guess New York is-”

The next arrow hit the man right in the throat. He went down.

“I guess New York isn’t in your cards, fool!” Laksho said, though he knew the man didn’t live long enough to hear him say it.

Laksho stood up and removed the ropes from his body. A lone native dismounted his horse and approached. He was an old Apache warrior from the looks of him.

“Thanks, but I didn’t need your help,” Laksho said. 

He holstered his Colt revolver. The Apache warrior threw a single bladder of fresh water. Eyes wide open in disbelief, Laksho stumbled in the sand to catch it.

“Now this… “ Laksho opened the bladder and took a few gulps of the cool water, “ this is what I needed. What’s your name, Apache?”

“My name is Vishwa!”



Vishwa and his bow.
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Author: Deepak Chopra and Shamik Dasgupta
Artist: Abhishek Singh et al.
Title: Ramayan 3392 AD Vol. 1: Mahavinaash Age
Year: 2007



Author's Note
I've decided to return to the Western setting yet again. I seem to have the most fun writing in this style and it comes really easy. This story is a retelling of a scene in the Ramayana: 3392AD graphic novel where Lakshman is attacked by three agents who are attempting to take him. Lakshman is eventually saved by none other than Vishwamitra. The plot here follows the original story almost exactly the same. The names are changed but similar to the original. Once again the biggest changes are pretty much the plot devices and the setting that enables this story to be told in this Western style. The names are again simply very similar or modified versions of the original names. I chose to retell this particular story because it was easy to retell in this Western style, partly due to the setting of the original story is Lakshman in a desert. The image I chose here is a very simple image of an Apache warrior on horseback. I think this image fits this story very well, even though I had trouble yet again finding an image that was reusable. This story fits the purpose of my project quite well, in that it’s another Western story to go along with my others.

Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Week 11 - Reading Diary B

This covers the second section of Ramayana: 3392 AD.

Ramayana: 3393 AD
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Again I am really enjoying this graphic novel. This section begins with Lakshman running into an ancient seer named Vishwamitra. Vishwamitra is looking for Rama and Lakshman ends up helping Vishwamitra find him. They end up finding him far off in another land and head towards a place where rakshasas are looking for a special place.
The things that stand out to me in this graphic novel are the illustrations and the retelling of this story in the futuristic dystopian setting. The illustrations are very colorful and they constantly show the bad places showing a very contrasting color compared to Rama who represents purity and dharma. The good places tend to be green and blue and far more fitting in with Rama. The futuristic technologies and dystopian setting make this retelling gritty which I like and it fits perfectly with this story.

I’m looking forward to the second half of this book!

Monday, November 2, 2015

Week 11 - Reading Diary A

For the next two weeks I will be reading Ramayana: 3392 AD. It is a retelling of the Ramayana in a dystopian setting. A dystopia is a place that is the opposite of a utopia. It generally refers to a place where the vast majority of people are unhappy and afraid, usually because they are treated unfairly by means of oppression and control.

After reading the first of four sections, this graphic novel is living up to the expectations I had for it. I thoroughly enjoy the dystopian films that I have watched in the past such as Blade Runner, Equilibrium, and the Matrix trilogy. One of my favorite video games of all time, Half Life 2, is a dystopian story.

Ramayana: 3392 AD
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The first thing I noticed about this graphic novel are the illustrations. It shows a futuristic setting with technology and advanced architecture. The lighting, however, is dark in most of the images. It helps to show the gloominess of this world. The writing is very good too. This first section covers the Ramayana up to the point where Rama is cast out into the wilderness for 14 years.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this graphic novel.